From 04f47ebd401a0f386f2dcf5a40f1eddcbdf2ee51 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: anugs <36812514+anugs@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Tue, 9 Mar 2021 23:03:28 +0530
Subject: [PATCH] Update index.html (#16829)

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 <div class="intro">
     <p>
-        Home Assistant offers four different installation methods. We recommend one of the following two:
+        Home Assistant offers four different installation methods. We recommend using one of the following two methods:
     </p>
     <ul>
         <li><b>Home Assistant Operating System</b>: Minimal Operating System optimized to power Home Assistant. 
-        Comes with Supervisor to manage Home Assistant Core and add-ons pre-installed. Recommended installation type.</li>
+        It comes with Supervisor to manage Home Assistant Core and pre-installed add-ons. Recommended installation method.</li>
         <li><b>Home Assistant Container</b>: Standalone container-based installation of Home Assistant Core (e.g. Docker).</li>
     </ul>
-    <p>In addition there are two installation methods available for experienced users:</p>
+    <p>There are two alternative installation methods available for experienced users:</p>
     <ul>
         <li><b>Home Assistant Supervised</b>: Manual installation of the Supervisor.</li>
-        <li><b>Home Assistant Core</b>: Manual installation using a Python virtual environment.</li>
+        <li><b>Home Assistant Core</b>: Manual installation using Python virtual environment.</li>
     </ul>
     <p>
-        The list below shows which installation method is available on what device or platform.
+        The list below shows the installation method available based on the device and platform being used.
     </p>
     <p>
-        We recommend a dedicated system to run Home Assistant. If you are unsure what to choose, using a 
+        We recommend a dedicated system to run Home Assistant. If you are unsure of what to choose, using a 
         <b>Raspberry Pi</b> and the <b>Home Assistant Operating System</b> is a good start.
     </p>
 
     <p>
         If you are using the <a href="/blue">Home Assistant Blue</a>, the Home Assistant Operating System is 
-        already preinstalled. You can skip this installation step.
+        already installed. So you can skip this installation step.
     </p>
 </div>