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@@ -163,7 +163,7 @@ Lots of effort has gone into this new and amazing feature for this release:

Not sure [what WebRTC is]? No worries! Let us try to explain. If you are
-watching a camera in Home Assistant, you might have noticed it is something
+watching a camera in Home Assistant, you might have noticed it is sometimes
a bit slow and delayed. WebRTC support is going to change that!
Camera streams will now try to use WebRTC whenever possible.
@@ -175,14 +175,14 @@ instance and the camera you are trying to view.
[The Open Home Foundation] will host the negotiating network infrastructure
([STUN servers]) **for free for all Home Assistant users** and enable the
-capability to use WebRTC for peer-to-peer connections whenever possible.
+capability to use WebRTC for peer-to-peer connections whenever possible. If you are using Home Assistant OS or our containers, after you update this will automatically work out of the box.

Sometimes, a direct connection between the client (like your browser
or mobile app) and the camera is not possible; in those situations, the camera
stream needs to be relayed by an external server. [Home Assistant Cloud] now
-provides this relay server, and it's **included as one of the many benefits**
+provides this relay server ([TURN server]), and it's **included as one of the many benefits**
available to all subscribers!
So, no matter where you are, you should always be able to watch your cameras
@@ -190,12 +190,11 @@ via this low-latency technology. If, for whatever reason, WebRTC is not
available, it will fall back to using the old method of streaming to ensure
you can always see your camera feeds.
-So, after reading all of this, what changed? Well, everything will still look
-and work the same, but your camera feeds will be faster, more responsive, and
-less delayed! 🎉
+So, after reading all of this, what changed? Well, camera feeds will do everything they did before, but will be faster, more responsive, and less delayed! 🎉
[Home Assistant Cloud]: /cloud/
[STUN servers]: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/STUN
+[TURN server]: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Traversal_Using_Relays_around_NAT
[The Open Home Foundation]: https://www.openhomefoundation.org/
[WebRTC is a standard]: https://webrtc.org/
[what WebRTC is]: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/WebRTC
@@ -368,12 +367,11 @@ That's a pretty cool improvement. 😎
## Voice
Last year, 2023, was the [Year of the Voice] for Home Assistant. And while this
-year wasn't specifically dedicated to voice, everyone is still working hard
+year isn't specifically dedicated to voice, everyone is still working hard
towards the goal of letting users control their homes with their voice in
their own language.
-As you might have heard through many community channels 🕵️♀️, this will
-become a reality for everyone. We are working hard to get our Home Assistant
+As you might have heard through many community channels 🕵️♀️, we are working to make this a reality for everyone. We are hard at work getting our Home Assistant
voice satellite hardware ready and available for selling and shipping! 🤗
Stay tuned for more information on that soon!
@@ -384,11 +382,9 @@ Stay tuned for more information on that soon!
One of the things we are working on is the Home Assistant intents. This is a
way for a voice assistant to understand the intention behind your spoken
-sentence. This is a very crucial part of a local voice assistant.
+sentences. This is a very crucial part of a local voice assistant.
-In this release, we decided to align and combine the Canadian French and French
-languages, as they are very similar. This means Canadian French users are
-getting a ton of great new voice features!
+In this release, we decided to align and combine Canadian French and French languages for the time being. Though we understand it is a unique dialect, this is about giving Canadian French users a lot more voice features.

@@ -408,17 +404,16 @@ in our [developer documentation].
### Join the Wake Word Collective
Another essential part of voice is the Wake Word! And this is where **everyone**,
-no matter your skill level, can help out in just a minute of your time!
+no matter your skill level, can help out with just a minute of your time!
Wake words are the words you say to wake up your voice assistant. For example,
_"Hey Google"_ or _"Alexa"_. As we are building our own voice assistant with
our own wake words, we need to train our models to recognize these words,
regardless of your accent, language, gender, or age.
-So, get your whole home involved —🏠 Including your kids, your parents,
-friends and family! Take a minute to help us out by recording your voice
+So, get your whole home involved 🏠! Take a minute to help us out by recording your voice
saying the wake word. It is super easy, and you can do it right from your
-browser, no need to install anything!
+browser or mobile, no need to install anything!
[**Help us improve our wake words today! ❤️**](https://ohf-voice.github.io/wake-word-collective/)