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 ## Energy dashboard: Self-sufficiency
 
-The energy dashboard as a new gauge, added by [@TillFleisch]: Self-sufficiency.
+The energy dashboard has a new gauge, added by [@TillFleisch]: Self-sufficiency.
 
 This gauge tells you how self-sufficient your home is. The more you take from
 the grid, the more the value will decrease.
@@ -207,9 +207,10 @@ the grid, the more the value will decrease.
 <img class="no-shadow" src='/images/blog/2023-07/self-sufficiency.png' alt='Screenshot showing the latest updates and tweaks made to the integrations dashboard, making it less busy.'>
 
 Increasing this value can be done by lowering your consumption from the grid,
-for example, by using a washing machine when the sun is shining or by creating
-automations that turn off devices when solar production is low. Another more
-drastic way is by adding more solar panels or battery storage.
+for example, by using the washing machine when the sun is shining and solar
+production is high or by creating automations that turn off devices when solar
+production is low. Another more drastic way is by adding more solar panels
+or battery storage.
 
 [@TillFleisch]: https://github.com/TillFleischmann