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## Getting insights into water usage
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+Since Home Assistant added energy management, tracking the usage of water🚰
+has been requested quite a bit. It was [raised again during this month of WTH](https://community.home-assistant.io/t/wth-do-we-have-energy-dashboard-and-no-water-dashboard/467168),
+and with over 370 votes, it is clearly wanted a lot.
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+This release adds the ability to monitor your water usage in the energy dashboard!
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+Although water is not strictly “energy”, it is still a [valuable resource](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Water_resources)
+to track. It is often tightly coupled with energy usage (like gas) when using
+hot water, and the gained insight can help you reduce your ecological footprint
+by using less water 🌎.
-This has been long time requested, and was also really popular in this month's
-WTH (over 350 votes!): [WTH do we have Energy dashboard and no Water dashboard?](https://community.home-assistant.io/t/wth-do-we-have-energy-dashboard-and-no-water-dashboard/467168)
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-The request for being able to track water usage in Home Assistant comes up
-quite a lot. This release add support for doing so!
+Some integrations, like [Flo](/integrations/flo), [Flume](/integrations/flume), and
+[HomeWizard Energy](/integrations/homewizard), have been adjusted to support
+tracking water. Furthermore, you can create your own using templates, MQTT,
+or ESPHome (requires [ESPHome version 2022.10.1](https://www.esphome.io/changelog/2022.10.0.html#release-2022-10-1-october-26) or newer).
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