From a2e0f0c742a2b5c3f4945cd26b87b0c63c14f4ff Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: "Michael A. Alderete" <4359+alderete@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Wed, 6 May 2020 23:29:50 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Edit for clarity and grammar (#13314) --- source/_integrations/synology_dsm.markdown | 22 +++++++++++----------- 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-) diff --git a/source/_integrations/synology_dsm.markdown b/source/_integrations/synology_dsm.markdown index d45bd38c218..00511427100 100644 --- a/source/_integrations/synology_dsm.markdown +++ b/source/_integrations/synology_dsm.markdown @@ -12,15 +12,15 @@ ha_codeowners: ha_config_flow: true --- -The `synology_dsm` sensor platform allows getting various statistics from your [Synology NAS](https://www.synology.com). +The `synology_dsm` sensor platform provides access to various statistics from your [Synology NAS](https://www.synology.com). ## Configuration -There are two ways to integrate Synology DSM in Home Assistant. +There are two ways to integrate your Synology DSM into Home Assistant. ### Via the frontend -Menu: *Configuration* -> *Integrations*. Search for "Synology DSM", fill the configuration form, click submit. +Menu: *Configuration* -> *Integrations*. Search for "Synology DSM", fill in the configuration form with your username and password, and then click **Submit**. ### Via the configuration file @@ -29,14 +29,14 @@ Add the following section to your `configuration.yaml` file: ```yaml # Example configuration.yaml entry synology_dsm: - - host: IP_ADDRESS_OR_DNS_OF_SYNOLOGY_NAS + - host: IP_ADDRESS_OR_HOSTNAME_OF_SYNOLOGY_NAS username: YOUR_USERNAME password: YOUR_PASSWORD ``` {% configuration %} host: - description: The IP address or DNS of the Synology NAS to monitor. + description: The IP address or DNS hostname of the Synology NAS to monitor. required: true type: string port: @@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ ssl: default: true type: boolean username: - description: An user to connect to the Synology NAS (a separate account is advised, see the (Separate User Configuration)[#separate-user-configuration] section below for details). + description: The account username to connect to the Synology NAS. Using a separate account is advised, see the [Separate User Configuration](#separate-user-configuration) section below for details. required: true type: string password: @@ -58,11 +58,11 @@ password: required: true type: string volumes: - description: "Array of volumes to monitor. Defaults to all volumes. Replace any spaces in the volume name with underscores, e.g., `volume 1` with `volume_1`." + description: "Array of volumes to monitor. Defaults to all volumes. Replace any spaces in the volume name with underscores. For example, replace `volume 1` with `volume_1`." required: false type: list disks: - description: "Array of disks to monitor. Defaults to all disks. Use only disk names like `sda`, `sdb`, etc." + description: "Array of disks to monitor. Defaults to all disks. Use only disk names like `sda`, `sdb`, and so on." required: false type: list {% endconfiguration %} @@ -82,15 +82,15 @@ When creating the user, it is possible to deny access to all locations and appli
-Using two-factor authentication is not supported. Please use a strong, randomly generated password. +The Home Assistant integration doesn't support two-factor authentication for Synology DSM accounts. Use a strong, randomly generated password to improve security.
## Created sensors -Sensors are : -- `cpu_other_load`: Displays unspecified load in percentage. +Sensors are: +- `cpu_other_load`: Displays unspecified (that is, not user or system) load in percentage. - `cpu_user_load`: Displays user load in percentage. - `cpu_system_load`: Displays system load in percentage. - `cpu_total_load`: Displays combined load in percentage.