From a61f952fa3efac748a2d9d9b7f7ddaf08a39b9dc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Franck Nijhof
Date: Wed, 3 Jul 2024 15:46:16 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] 2024.7: Intro tweaks
---
source/_posts/2024-07-03-release-20247.markdown | 8 ++++----
1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
diff --git a/source/_posts/2024-07-03-release-20247.markdown b/source/_posts/2024-07-03-release-20247.markdown
index 2b20f1e9aaa..97d40d6878b 100644
--- a/source/_posts/2024-07-03-release-20247.markdown
+++ b/source/_posts/2024-07-03-release-20247.markdown
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ And not just that, I bring you these release notes from our refreshed website
that [Madelena] and [yours truly] have been spontaneously working on over the
past few days. We hope you like it! ❤️
-We have some fantastic additions to [Assist](/voice_control): Timers!
+Some fantastic additions to [Assist](/voice_control): Timers!
and the ability to expose your scripts to LLMs. In case you missed it,
it has been covered and demonstrated live in our recent
[Voice - Chapter 7 livestream!](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nLLO4u2Tbbo)
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ The [sections view](/dashboards/sections/) becomes more feature-rich with
every release, and this time, the [ability to resize cards](#resize-the-cards-on-your-dashboard)
is added. Absolutely the highlight of the release for me!
-However, my second favorite highlight for this release is the ability to
+My second favorite highlight for this release is the ability to
[take control of blueprint-based automations](#take-control-of-blueprint-based-automations).
There are so many [amazing blueprints out there](https://community.home-assistant.io/c/blueprints-exchange/53/l/top?period=yearly),
and many are perfect, but sometimes they fit 90% of what you need. Being able
@@ -238,9 +238,9 @@ Well, now you can! 🎉
Temporary screenshot, image needs to be replaced by an actual screenshot.
-You can now take full control over the automations created from a blueprint.
+You can now [take full control over the automations created from a blueprint](/docs/automation/using_blueprints/#editing-an-imported-blueprint).
By taking control, Home Assistant will fully convert the blueprint automation
-into a regular, stand-alone automation. This allows you to make any tweak you
+into an regular, stand-alone, automation. This allows you to make any tweak you
want, without having to fully re-invent the wheel.