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@@ -19,9 +19,10 @@ Home Assistant 2025.2! ❤️
In the previous release, we [overhauled our backup system](/blog/2025/01/03/release-20251/#overhaul-of-the-backup-system),
and the response was overwhelming! Tons of suggestions and feature requests
-came in, so this release is—once again—focused on backups. We’ve added loads
-of improvements, including the first integrations to store your backups in
-**Google Drive** and **Microsoft OneDrive**!
+came in, so this release is—once again—focused on backups. Based on this
+community feedback, we’ve added loads of improvements, including the first
+integrations to store your backups in **Google Drive**
+and **Microsoft OneDrive**!
This release also brings exciting new features to **Voice**! Home Assistant can
now call your **analog phone**, and when dinner is ready, you can **broadcast**
@@ -32,7 +33,7 @@ On **February 12, 2025**, we’re streaming live on YouTube all about Voice:
Be sure to subscribe and hit the bell so you don’t miss it. 🛎
Before diving into the release notes, I also want to give a shoutout to our
-friends at [**ESPHome**](https://esphome.io/)! Powering so much of the Home
+friends at [**ESPHome**](https://esphome.io/) powering so much of the Home
Assistant ecosystem, including Home Assistant Voice PE! And
on **February 19th**, they’ll be hosting a
[**live release party for ESPHome 2025.2**](https://www.youtube.com/live/HtG3fjAO96c)! 🎉
@@ -90,8 +91,8 @@ This release includes a lot of the most requested improvements and abilities.
### Unencrypted backups
The new backup system came with a lot of security improvements, including
-encryption of backups. However, as it turns out, many use these backups to
-extract and restore single files or configurations, a use case in which
+encryption of backups. However, as it turns out, many users use these backups
+to extract and restore single files or configurations, a use case in which
encryption made things more difficult. In this release we made two changes
to the backup system to address this.
@@ -149,15 +150,15 @@ online, and then starts a backup.
### Re-introduction of the backup toggle on update
If you run Home Assistant OS, you get updates for Home Assistant along with
-all your add-ons. This used to have a toggle to create a backup before updating,
-which was removed in the previous release.
+all your add-ons. The update dialog used to have a toggle to create a backup
+before updating, which was removed in the previous release.
This change was made because this feature was considered redundant when running
regular automated backups. However, we’ve received a lot of feedback that many
people relied on these backups to ensure they had the latest data, for instance,
if they needed to roll back to a previous version of an add-on. We are
re-introducing this backup on update toggle in this release, but in a smarter
-way.
+way. 🤓
#### Backup on updating Home Assistant
@@ -186,8 +187,9 @@ version of the add-on, so you can always roll back to it if needed.
To prevent your system from filling up with old add-on backups, we only retain
-one add-on backup, automatically deleting the previous backup whenever
-a new one is created.
+one backup per add-on, automatically deleting the previous backup whenever
+a new one is created. Add-ons backups you created manually, of course,
+remain untouched and will not be deleted automatically.
### Improved filenames for backups
@@ -237,7 +239,7 @@ Left the garage door open for 30 minutes? No problem, let Home Assistant call
and ask if they want to close it.
_(Starting a conversation with the default conversation agent is a bit more work
-and did not make it this release)_
+and did not make it this release)._
### New Broadcast intent
@@ -312,13 +314,13 @@ and improvements to existing ones! You’re all awesome 🥰
We welcome the following new integrations in this release:
- **[Google Drive]**, added by [@tronikos]
- Add your Google Drive as a location for Home Assistant to store backups on.
+ Add your Google Drive as a location to store your Home Assistant backups.
- **[Homee]**, added by [@Taraman17]
Integrate your [Homee smart home system] into Home Assistant.
- **[igloohome]**, added by [@keithle888]
- Monitor the battery levels of your [iglooco smart access device(s)].
+ Monitor the battery levels of your [igloo smart access device(s)].
- **[LetPot]**, added by [@jpelgrom]
- Monitor your [LetPot indoor garden].
+ Monitor and control your [LetPot indoor garden].
- **[OneDrive]**, added by [@zweckj]
Allows you to store your Home Assistant backups in your Microsoft OneDrive.
- **[Overseerr]**, added by [@joostlek]
@@ -353,7 +355,7 @@ The following virtual integration have been added:
[Google Drive]: /integrations/google_drive
[Homee smart home system]: https://hom.ee/
[Homee]: /integrations/homee
-[iglooco smart access device(s)]: https://www.igloohome.co/#products
+[igloo smart access device(s)]: https://www.igloohome.co/#products
[igloohome]: /integrations/igloohome
[LetPot indoor garden]: https://letpot.com/
[LetPot]: /integrations/letpot