2024.6: Finish integration section

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@@ -222,8 +222,8 @@ by area and domain.
 
 ## Integrations
 
-Thanks to our community for keeping the pace up with the new integrations and
+Thanks to our community for keeping pace with the new integrations and
-improvements to existing ones! You're all awesome 🥰
+improvements to existing ones! You’re all awesome 🥰
 
 ### New integrations
 
@@ -236,11 +236,15 @@ We welcome the following new integrations in this release:
 - **[Azure data explorer]**, added by [@kaareseras]<br />
   Forward events from Home Assistant to the Azure Data Explorer for analysis.
 - **[IMGW-PIB]**, added by [@bieniu]<br />
-  Hydrological data from Institute of Meteorology and Water Management - National Research Institute providing information about rivers and water reservoirs in Poland.
+  Hydrological data from the Institute of Meteorology and
+  Water Management—National Research Institute provides information
+  about rivers and water reservoirs in Poland.
 - **[Intelligent Storage Acceleration]**, added by [@bdraco]<br />
-  Intelligent Storage Acceleration Library (ISAL) is used for accelerating our Home Assistant frontend. It is automatically enabled/activated.
+  Intelligent Storage Acceleration Library (ISAL) is used to accelerate our
+  Home Assistant frontend. It is automatically enabled/activated.
 - **[Monzo]**, added by [@JakeMartin-ICL]<br />
-  Connect your Monzo bank account to Home Assistant, and get insights into your account balance.
+  Connect your Monzo bank account to Home Assistant and get insights
+  into your account balance.
 
 [@bdraco]: https://github.com/bdraco
 [@bieniu]: https://github.com/bieniu
@@ -257,26 +261,26 @@ We welcome the following new integrations in this release:
 
 ### Noteworthy improvements to existing integrations
 
-It is not just new integrations that are added, but also existing integrations
+It is not just new integrations that are added; existing integrations
-are improved constantly. Here are some of the noteworthy changes to existing
+are also constantly improved. Here are some of the noteworthy changes
-integrations:
+to existing integrations:
 
-- Need a wireless device that can bridge a larger distance? A [LoRa] device
+- Do you need a wireless device that can bridge a larger distance, like
-  might be a good option. Thanks to [@angelnu] we now have a working integration
+  kilometers? A [LoRa] device might be a good option. Thanks to [@angelnu]
-  for [The Things Network].
+  we now have a working integration for [The Things Network].
 - [@starkillerOG] added support for PIR and battery sensors to the [Reolink]
   integrations. Nice!
 - The [Teslemetry] integration has been expanded tremendously, adding new
   platforms and features. Awesome job [@Bre77]!
-- Limited templates can now be used to disable triggers, conditions and actions.
+- Limited templates can now be used to disable triggers, conditions
-  [@farmio] thought this might be helpful for blueprint creators.
+  and actions. [@farmio] thought this might be helpful for blueprint creators.
 - [@Anrijs] added support for the [Aranet Radiation] devices to the
   [Aranet] integration. Nice!
 - You can now set the cutting height of your [Husqvarna Automower], and there
   switches to make it stay out of certain zones. Thanks [@Thomas55555]!
 - [@thomaskistler] added flow and rain sensor support to the [Hydrawise]
   integration. Great!
-- The [SwitchBot Cloud] integration now has support for the [SwitchBot Meter],
+- The [SwitchBot Cloud] integration now supports the [SwitchBot Meter],
   [MeterPlus], and [Outdoor Meter]. Thanks [@laurence-presland]!
 
 [@angelnu]: https://github.com/angelnu
@@ -302,9 +306,9 @@ integrations:
 
 ### Integrations reaching platinum quality level
 
-The following integrations reached platinum 🏆 level on our
+The following integrations reached the platinum 🏆 level on our
 [integration quality scale](/docs/quality_scale). These integrations are
-best of the best and give you an excellent out of the box experience.
+the best of the best and give you an excellent out-of-the-box experience.
 
 - **[Fyta]**, done by [@dontinelli]
 - **[Google Generative AI]**, done by [@tronikos]
@@ -328,9 +332,9 @@ Congratulations to all the developers who worked on these integrations!
 ### Now available to set up from the UI
 
 While most integrations can be set up directly from the Home Assistant user
-interface, some integrations were only available to set up via
+interface, some were only available using YAML configuration. We keep moving
-YAML-configuration. We keep adding more integrations to the UI, making them
+more integrations to the UI, making them more accessible for everyone
-easier to set up and use for everyone.
+to set up and use.
 
 The following integrations are now available via the Home Assistant UI: