Rephrased introduction to specifically remove the word "elite" and the sentences "OmniLogic brings backyard control to the forefront of pool technology" plus "Enjoy the luxuries of full automation from the most intuitive app with effortless upgrades to always keep your backyard on the cutting edge." because they only sound like self-promotion and advertising/marketing and not actually descriptive of the product, which is not strange considering that it is a straight copy from https://www.hayward-pool.com/shop/en/pools/omnilogic-i-auomni--1
Suggest to generally just follow Wikipedia's guidelines regarding adverts https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Template:Advert